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Funny last scene and I could appreciate the build up to it. Many don't like clowns but HE does and maybe it's because he has orange hair himself.
I wish it was funnier though. The beginning (up to the very last line actually) doesn't ring comedy. I forgot that it was a comedy in fact. Well written and all.
I think you missed the chance at a decent joke where one agent says to the other to "stop clowning around" when he's got his gun pulled on Butcho.
I laughed at the chicken bit and the clown face in the window. Some decent gags there. I appreciate the different angle taken here with it not being a "bomb" and the absurdity of a clown being thrown out of a plane for the President is weird enough to get a nod of approval from me.
Decent tale. Chuckles here and there. Ending just fine. I'm way tired of clowns, though, along with zombies, vampires, people with Scream masks, etc. etc. Henry
Short notes: Partly I lost the orientation within this airplane. Then your constant tries on comedy saved you. All in all it was nonetheless too confusing to entirely enjoy it. However, some situation comedy and slapstick landed well.
So I thought this was cute, however I guessed where you were going with it by the "that's what she wants" line. Probably could have spent less time describing the pilot and having the agents banter and more time with the agent and the clown. Tough category.
Yeah, this was mine. I never expected laugh out load bellows with milk flowing out the nose but crickets? Man, I suck at comedy. My mental images just don't translate to page. I did have to edit 3/4 of a page to meet the requirement but that's no excuse. Dustin's comments really rang true with the exposition (in your face) dialog, so I'll take that to heart. Hmmm, yeah, I thought it would've done better.
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In what way? I find it really difficult to imagine a creepy clown. They look funny, not creepy.
Stephen King's IT clown never looked funny to me, very much creepy. They do look creepy, can always be creepy, it's a part of life, the majority of us have seen creepy clowns. Just a few years ago there was that creepy clown scare phase that got into the news, spread from North America to Europe.
Stephen King's IT clown never looked funny to me, very much creepy. They do look creepy, can always be creepy, it's a part of life, the majority of us have seen creepy clowns. Just a few years ago there was that creepy clown scare phase that got into the news, spread from North America to Europe.
Who's the majority?
Yeah, I saw that stupid thing on the news... but I'm an adult.