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CameronD
Posted: April 4th, 2018, 12:16pm Report to Moderator
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This is a story that really needed the title otherwise I wouldn't have got it by the story alone.  It was decent overall.


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I think the writer was challenged by the 1 page constraint and for that perhaps failed to deliver on the mother's pain, however I respect the effort and the overall theme here.


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It didn't make a connection with me.  Solid 3.

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SAC
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Gee, I liked this one, and it begs for more. This was colorful and visual, and appeals to my sensibilities anyway. Very good job!

Steve


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