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Posted: March 9th, 2006, 7:40am Report to Moderator
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Consumption by James Anthony McSloy - Short, Horror - Have you ever got the feeling that your being watched while your at work? Consumption is the story of Laura, a pretty barmaid who one night gets the wrong kind of attention... - html, format


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I enjoyed reading this. I really felt like I was in the bar, and the characters seemed believable. I'm wondering though, why are the pillows yellow? i notice the guys teeth and eyes are yellow too. is there a certain reason for this?
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Hey thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. The reason for the pillows being yellow are that Victor secreates a bile like residue from his body, just to make things a little more gross.

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