Hitler And The War by Ben Padgett - Short, Comedy - This is how the war really ended. 5 pages. - doc, format

A boring room.

What does a boring room look like?

They didn’t have cell phones back when Hitler was “alive”

I laughed at how annoying 5 pages could be, it had moments where it had potential and the writing itself isn’t bad. This idea is just bad. I don't like posting bad reviews but I thought you'd at least put some effort into making this right for the time period.

Where is Balt when you need him?

I thought Wes was exaggerating a little bit, but he was dead-on with this one.  This seemed like something you wrote on the school bus ride home.  

The one thing in the entire script which was even remotely funny was unintentional.  When Hitler first spoke, you mentioned that he spoke with a German accent.  I'm really glad you did this because I was thinking he was going to talk with an Italian accent and sound like my cousin Vinny.


Phil

Thos was written in my 'vacation' away form simplyscripts. and you're right, it was written pretty quickly. Dont take it seriosuly, and it was never meant to offend (I promise this will be the last of my obscure, wierd, scripts that I will post)

After reading these hilarious review i had to check it out and oh my god. I found the comedy of the year. It is amazing. Great job.

Quoted from -Ben- Thos was written in my 'vacation' away form simplyscripts. and you're right, it was written pretty quickly. Dont take it seriosuly, and it was never meant to offend (I promise this will be the last of my obscure, wierd, scripts that I will post)

I wasn't offended by it.  I was annoyed with it!  If you get the reputation of posting really bad, first draft scripts that you just crank out, no one's going to want to read any your work.




Phil

Quoted from -Ben- I promise this will be the last of my obscure, wierd, scripts that I will post

We will hold you to this.

I hate how negative reviews almost force me to open the file and have a look.  What the heck is wrong with me?  Do I think you guys are lying or something?

I liked the very, very end -- kind of -- just because I think Austrailia is cool.  As for the rest?  Well, you should really try harder if you want people to take you seriously, Ben.

It's because I never give bad reviews, it throws you off. I should give bad reviews for good scripts just to spite you guys into reading scripts by those who (Ahead of time I'd tell what I'm doing) need them.  

The underground hit of the year, if only trailer runs would release that screenplay he keeps sending me scenes from.

At least Trailer hasn't IMed you while he was drunk and...well...you know how he is...he he he

I know that this was not suppose to be taken seriously, but on Hitler's dialouge you don't have to write it like it's in German.  Needs work!

I was lured into reading this by Bert. He tempted me with his statement about not being able to resist bad scripts. Thanks Bert.

This is crazy! -- haha

Why is Bush 103? Which Bush is it? Sr. or Jr.? Jr. wasn’t born yet during WW II and Sr. wasn’t old enough to be president (as opposed to “presidant”). You should use FDR (Franklin Delano Roosevelt) instead.

You know how to tell the difference between the president and the presidant? The president works in the “oval office” and the presidant works in the “presedentail ofice.” -- haha. Just messing with you.

I think you’re squeaking by on the United Nations joke. The United Nations was formed around that era but I would bet you probably didn’t know that and just assumed it.

Why is the Englishman friends with Hitler? He’s a traitor to his country but yet he’s against assassinating the queen?

I didn’t know blood would go everywhere if you pulled a man’s moustache hair out. That’s good to know in case I’m ever assaulted by a pervert with a mustache.

And everything else everyone else said, too.

Haa -- this was actually kind of funny.

Thnaks for the reviews anyway, I had Hitler on my mind for some reason.

Hitler was emant to be friends with english guy without actaully knowing he was jewish.

I agree with what everybody else has said about this "screenplay". Just curious to know what you think of it Ben?

I don't see what you mean.

I mean, what did you think of it? Where you happy with the way the story turned out or where you disappointed with it? Did you think it was good or do you think you could do better?