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Posted: April 1st, 2006, 10:25am Report to Moderator
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Superman: Resurrection by Benjamin Lahav - Sci Fi - A disillusioned Man of Steel returns to Metropolis from a seven year exile to save the city from a murderous Kryptonian supercomputer.  Little does he know that his enemy holds the key to one of his father's darkest secrets. 111 pages - rtf, format


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I thought it was good. Not 'exellent' but good. I'm not a big Superman fanatic myself, but it was pretty interesting. I have to say though, you went alittle too far in the opening scene. you had Lois Lane say the same thing in all the times she talked. She repeated the 'Seven year disapearance' four times out of five.take it down to two and it'll be better. I think.


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