Alien III: A new kind of terror by Tom Bennett - Horror - This is an alternative story of alien3 where Newt and Hicks survive the crash on Fury 161. 64 pages - doc, format )

Hey, Tom.  I tried to look at this, but the format is just too...out there.

If you are a big "Alien" fan, you should check out this link:

http://www.horrorlair.com/scripts/alien3_twohy.html

It's a rejected draft of Alien III by David Twohy -- the guy who did "Pitch Black" -- and it's one of the best unproduced scripts I've ever read.

It still takes place in a prison, but without all the religious mumbo-jumbo -- and it's tons better than the script they actually ended up using.  I have no idea what they were thinking.

Anyways -- look at the format and style of this one -- if you like "Alien" stuff, I can assure you that you will like this script -- learn from it -- then have another go at your own story.  Good luck.