Am I The Dad? by Jennifer Longe - Comedy, Romance - George was very surprised and happy when his wife told him that she was expecting. For a long time, she had been bragging about their nice new neighbor who was a dance teacher who had agreed to give her free classes at his place . The very first time he set his eyes on his son, he noticed that he did not look like him. Suzan, his wife, appeased him by saying that the resemblance will come as year pass. One day after a night out with friends, he decided to pay a visit to the neighbor he has heard so much about. To hi surprise, he look like his son. Because he loves his wife very much, he decides to forget it and act as if it never happened. As long as she never cheats on him again. One day, Suzan told him that she was going out to meet a friend. He follows her and finds her at the same table with Peter (the neighbor). He goes back home heart broken. A few minutes later, Suzan arrives. For the first time, he decides to confront her.  88 pages - pdf, format

Hi Jenifer,

The script was pretty good, but the formatting was just awful. There were some lines that could've ben better, like the beginning speech by George is a little, blah. It could be more catchy, but then again, that's just me.

Alanah~