Thomas or Sandy? by Michel J. Duthin - Series, Comedy - Pilot - Sandy Tomasi writes novels, a mix of roman noir and erotic, using an alias: Thomas Sandy. No one could think she writes those bestsellers. Agoraphobic, she never leaves her apartment. She is surrounded by her sister Alex, a loony man eater, her daughter Jules, who is gay, her ex-husband Paul, probably still in love with her, and a lot of characters as crazy as she could be. 35 pages - pdf, format

This is simply an attempt of a project of sitcom. It was funny to me. Hope you'll enjoy it.

Michel

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Hey michel, I got to finally read this. Sorry it took so long for a review. You have a good grasp in female dialgoue - something I would like to do. Your descriptions are clean and concise. I was disappointed how she did not get laid in the end- that was messed up. But it didn't make sense since the guy was supposedly a "robber".  I love the scene when the main protagonist's sister hits the teddy - priceless. Over all I enjoyed it - nice work.

Gabriel

Thank you Gabriel for your review. I'm glad you liked it. In fact, I discovered that writing a serie is not a easy exercise. I have two more episodes but I was waiting to get good feedbacks before submit them.

I'll let you know

Michel