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Don
Posted: February 18th, 2007, 8:50pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Judge by Yo Ling - Short, Comedy - Judge says man guilty. Man say he not. Judge get big surprise. 3 pages - pdf, format


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Posted: February 18th, 2007, 9:04pm Report to Moderator
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I'm assuming that this was written in another language and translated into English, or that English is your second language.  While I didn't thing it was that great a piece, the stylized broken English kept my interest.


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I don't get this script at all? What exactly were yout rying to do? The broken English just made me laugh in areas I guess I wasn't supposed to (particularly the judge's sex with a 16 year old boy, at least that's what I think was happening).

The dialog and the descriptions made me laugh, but I don't think that is exactly what you were going for so I'm really not sure what else to say. Overall, I guess I didn't like it.


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