Atrum Fatum | Episode One | Reborn Part One by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - A Girl is recruited to join a Demon fighting organization after she mysteriously under goes an unusual change that will affect her for the rest of her life, Meanwhile The SU Council sends her off to there Training facility for 2 years to control her supernatural abilities. When She finally completes her training she is assigned to a new Team assigned to a city that has a high concentration of demonic activity, Her and her team mates must protect the city and its people from the dark forces of evil.  - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode Two | Revelations Part Two by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - Agent Hunter and Starks return to the base to save Lee and Kerby, The Team starts searching for the demons that attacked the base and how they managed to get in, who is this mysterious robed demon and what are his intentions? - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode Three | Aquatica by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - The Team are ordered to investigate a problem with one of the SU Council's research labs located several miles Under the Ariston Ocean, Can the team learn why the researchers have stopped communicating with the council? What will they find in the Ariston Ocean? - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode Four | The Wicked Way by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - A powerful and Ancient Warlock is awakened, and he searches for the beings responsible for locking him away, Hunter and Starks must stop this Warlock from harming innocent people.  - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode Five | Our Futures by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - Hunter and Lee are recalled to the SU Council Island to investigate some new information surrounding the Night Watcher; Agent Tanya Hunter. Meanwhile Loke follows Hunter around watching her every move while she's on patrol what is he up to? What will hunter learn when she returns the island? - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode Six | Burnout by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - A Mysterious heat wave hits the city of Ariston during the Winter, People think nothing of it, However Team SU4 thinks that it maybe Supernatural in origin, can the team find the cause of the mysterious heat wave? - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode Seven | Stoned by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - A Demon with the ability to petrify people rises in an old abandoned subway and the only witness are a group of potheads, Meanwhile the demon sets out to cause Chao's can the team stop him? - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode Eight | The Night Watcher Part One by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - Hunter begins having strange dreams that are connected to Loke and tries to make sense of it all, Meanwhile Loke sets out to steal and ancient artifact from a museum, Can Hunter discover the meaning of these dreams and will Loke steal the Artifact? - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode Nine | The Night Watcher Part Two by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - Following the events of the last episode; Hunter is battling Loke and appears to have the upper hand; meanwhile the reasoning for Lokes descension is discovered; can hunter defeat Loke? And who is that Mysterious Unknown Demon? - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode Ten | When Goes Around by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - A Incident in the Past Reunites Starks with an agent from a different team, Team SU4 and Half of Team SU1 is sent to investigate a laboratory giving off dangerously high levels of Magical Energies, Meanwhile theres something odd about this place will Hunter Figure it out? - html, format )

Atrum Fatum | Episode 11 | Facade by Martell F. (when) - Series, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci Fi - Jeremy arrives at the base to help the team with their fight against Loke; However there is more to Jeremy's plan then he's leading them all to believe; will the team figure it out? - html, format )

could use some reviews, tips, suggestions, and what not please thanks.

Hey When,

Just to give you a heads up, most posters here live by the quid pro quo principle. You have to give a little to get a little. Review some scripts here and I guarantee that the folks around here will give you work a review in return.

That said, I gave the first episode a quick glance. I didn't go into the story because I couldn't really get passed the format. It look like either a transcript or a Radio play. If that was your intention then that's fine but you will probably get a lot more readers if the scripts are in standard script format.

Check out this very useful thread:

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-screenwrite/m-1121017393/

There's a lot of do's and dont's regarding format, plus some other good pointers.


Cheers
Rob

I have to agree with Rob, Martell.  You post a whole series and expect to people read it when you haven't reviewed anyone's work.  It's a give and take, here.

Also, regarding your formatting....wow.  I don't know what type of formatting it is, but it will turn some people off from reading your work.


Phil

i see, okay i will start doing that, and converting my scripts to a different format... again )-\  alright. thank you.