Ass and the Elephant by Ron Foth Jr. - Short, Comedy - Two neighbors...a fascist freak & a lefty loon.  What could be worse? 20 pages - pdf, format

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The first thing I noticed when I opened up the script was the length of the descriptions.  Your first three are 7, 7, and 5 lines respectively.  Break these up to around 3 or 4 lines.  It makes it easier on the reader and makes your script look much cleaner.

Also, you're either missing some words or use the wrong ones in a lot of your descriptions.  You may want to go back through it.

On page 10, it appears that you switched a line of dialogue between Roy and the Robber.

I'd give the Middle Easterner a name.

On the whole, the story was pretty good.  I think the banter between the two flowed quite well, and you managed to cover probably every issue that political parties have with one another.

I'm not an overly political person myself and you managed to keep my interest throughout, so good job there.