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So, what are you writing?

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More Magic by Steve Burton (SBurton) - Drama - After both survive turmoil, their same name brings a straight black actor and a gay white actor-writer together. They team up on a film project that creates more greatness for both.  107 pages - pdf format

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Seems like you have kind of a "Slaughterhouse Five" thing happening here.  Billy Pilgrim has come unstuck in time.  

Um, I'm not sure what this is.  The pacing is kind of manic.  A new scene starts every few seconds.  Sometimes 10 times per page.  

The formatting is pretty good and the writing is lean and sharp, but I'm totally lost.  I can hang with a few pages of this but give me someting to hang my hat on.  Where am I?  And what is going on in this story?

Oh, and what is 'following'?  I've never seen that particular extension before.



Your comments welcome on:  GOD GETS FIRED.  Comedy, 89 pages.  Humans are such a failure that God loses his job.  Worse, his ex-wife is appointed to oversee Earth’s destruction.  Luckily, God has a plan…but it’s not about saving us.  It’s about winning her back.

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/GodGetsFired.pdf
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