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Posted: May 18th, 2007, 8:14pm Report to Moderator
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The Tragedy In Daydream by Dallas Coyle (godforbidtv) - Horror - Darren is a composer slowly losing his mind working on a new piece of music. He meets a bunch of crazy characters as his wife, Bonnie, is slowly going crazy as well. 94 pages - pdf, format


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Man, what the fuck is up with your title page?

Anyway, this was properly formatted and everything. But a lot of members here absolutely dread "we see"s and camera directions, so I suggest you lose 'em (though I personally don't mind them, because a lot of professionals write this way).

People mostly write spec scripts here. Spec scripts do not include camera directions or movements, nor do they include "we see" in their descriptions. Your screenplay here should be as closest to a story as possible, unless this is a shooting draft.

Just my two cents.

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Julio,
   Thanks very much for your two cents. I'm actually directing this script. Did you read the script at all? I wanted to get pointers on the story not necessarily the camera movements. Also, some of the script takes place while the protagonist is scoring a movie so these directions are warranted to a point. I thank you for giving me your opinion. Can you give me an idea how you felt about the story?

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