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Posted: September 3rd, 2007, 3:56pm Report to Moderator
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Fairest of Them All by Dino Barlaam - Short, Fantasy - Three well-known princesses have an outdoor picnic they will never forget. 7 pages - pdf, format


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HA! I love it. I think it's clever, and a little witty. Cinderella's closing line is classic.
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A little slow at first, but that last bit, not just the line is fantastic.


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Hey Dino.

Really enjoyed this read.  I actually thought the pace of the story was fine.

Just a small suggestion but I think you could have the flashback of Aurora and the guard doing the dirty right between Snow's "entertained" question and Aurora's "educating the mind" line.  To me it's a personal question followed by vivid evidence followed by her quick retort.  Just seeing the look on Aurora following that flashback would be priceless.  Again just a suggestion; it reads fine either way.

The ending had me cracking up.  Great job and congrats on getting it filmed.


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