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Posted: June 16th, 2008, 1:25pm Report to Moderator
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The Box by Shawn M. Kael (Dr_Kael) - Short, Thriller - When a mysterious package is left on Aaron's doorstep strange things start happening.  (24 pgs.) - pdf, format


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I read this when it was first posted but I could not put my review on here because the site was failing.

Anyway. what I remember of it was pretty good; but to be hones,t I did not understand the ending. Was a doppleganger inside the box or something. Sorry, I just didn't get it. Some guy just receives a package, pops an evil twin out of his ass and then that double kills him along with his girlfriend and friend. What the hell? Anywhoo, it was well-written on a technical level from what I remember. I remember liking the nightmare sequences a lot too. I'm sorry I'm not able to give a more in-depth review, but my memory of this is vague.

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