I read this in one sitting. It's probably the best script I've read on here so far since I didn't have one gripe with it.
It's funny as s***. It's not absolutely drop dead hilarious, but it is funny. I love your situations and dialogue.
Besides the obvious nod to Friday the 13th, I noticed little horror references. The part where Frank has a selection of horror movie masks to pick from, I would suggest cutting the clown mask from Camp Blood and replacing it with Leatherface since I think you should go with movies that are more well known here.
Overall, good job I would say. |