Violent Gentlemen by Adam Nadworniak (adamTheMovieguy) - Action - This is the story of one young man named Alex Vedder who falls into a secret society of duelists named "The Violent Gentlemen Society". Along his journey into this underworld he encounters drugs, sex, and murder and corruption. 104 pages - pdf, format

Just finished the script. Nice easy read and an excellent concept. If you want critique and it's just my opinion I would flesh out the Alex character a little more. The script also seems like it's in a sort of limbo between comedy and tough guy shoot em down. It might benefit you to go a little further in one direction. Either make it more about the guns or more about the comedy. That said excellent job!