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Don
Posted: September 11th, 2008, 8:39pm Report to Moderator
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Dead and Gone by Matt Smith - Short, Drama, Zombie - A virus plagues the nation, a small town is left to defend itself against the virus's victims. However, what happens when you can't let go? 10 pages - pdf, format


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Hi Matt,

I didn't find this zombie script was for me.  The zombie Nathan appeared to be aware of it's own existence, and that was why this script didn't sit well with me.  There was a few grammar and spelling issues in there.  It also sounded like a teen flick, and you tend not to need a brain when watching those films.

All the best.


Javier


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Posted: September 16th, 2008, 8:23pm Report to Moderator
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Javier, thanks for the review!

Funny you say it seemed like a teen flick, because I'm a teen. Yeah, I wanted Nathan to not be necessarily aware of his existence, but that at his core he was still human. I tried to make it clear that, under pressure, he would lose his sense of humanity. And yeah, I must've missed a few things during my proofreading.

But thanks again!  
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