Insomnia by Hunter Garcia - Short, Thriller, Romance - Darren Faulk used to be a drug addict, he was just relaased from jail for drug possesion. Dareen has been having very strange dreams, he would have never thought that they were because a Tumor in his head. The tumor is later removed, and he has had some memory loss he has to save the beautiful Cherry Scrovatch from th Serrial killer "The Alley Man"  - doc, format )

I just had a quick glance at this.

I think you need to learn how to format a script. This didn't even look like a script nor did it look like a play.

You need to learn this if you want people to read your stuff.