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Posted: December 15th, 2008, 5:16pm Report to Moderator
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Pom Pom Massacre by Amin Osman - Horror - Five years ago, Ness Kendrick was the queen of the pre-teen beauty pageant circuit.  Now she's a loner fighting her way through high school and avoiding her former pageant-mates-- the star cheerleaders who make her life miserable.  When Ness' former best friend is murdered and the rest of the cheer squad begin dropping like flies, Ness must go undercover as a cheerleader to solve the mystery of the cheerleader murders-- a mystery tracing all the way back to the beauty pageants. 150 pages - pdf, format


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its really interesting and incredibly well written.
good job. i really liked it!!
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Interesting, well written, it's a good script. But it's way to long, in fact this script is longer than The Dark Knight, what you should do is revise the script, cut it short, down to 120 pages at most, I'm sure there are lots of things that you find don't have to be in the script, most people won't read an unproduced script that's over 120 pages, so you should do that.

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Good script, sort of PROM NIGHT meets CHEERLEADER MASSACRE. As the other two have said, well written. My only gripe is the length. Good job.
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