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Pom Pom Massacre by Amin Osman - Horror - Five years ago, Ness Kendrick was the queen of the pre-teen beauty pageant circuit. Now she's a loner fighting her way through high school and avoiding her former pageant-mates-- the star cheerleaders who make her life miserable. When Ness' former best friend is murdered and the rest of the cheer squad begin dropping like flies, Ness must go undercover as a cheerleader to solve the mystery of the cheerleader murders-- a mystery tracing all the way back to the beauty pageants. 150 pages - pdf, format
Interesting, well written, it's a good script. But it's way to long, in fact this script is longer than The Dark Knight, what you should do is revise the script, cut it short, down to 120 pages at most, I'm sure there are lots of things that you find don't have to be in the script, most people won't read an unproduced script that's over 120 pages, so you should do that.
Good Luck in the future,
Xavier
Those who believe that they are the best, the most popular, the go to guy, those are usually the ones who need the most help.
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