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 OWC - Love Is All You Need (currently 739 views) |
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| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 2:33pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator  So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts5529 Posts Per Day 1.67 |
Love Is All You Need by Bugs Bunny - Short, Drama - A secret is revealed during a family picnic. - pdf, format  |
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| michel |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 2:49pm |
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Yellow  A French Kiss
LocationFrance Posts1221 Posts Per Day 0.91 |
Short (too short?), crude and not good. This is definetely not a drama. "Memories" is a master piece compared to this one. I can't see the writer's intent. |
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| Zombie Sean |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 3:02pm |
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Yellow  I eat your brains and gain your knowledge.
LocationAnywhere there's a zombie... Posts1301 Posts Per Day 0.81 |
I loved this one. No pun intended. Wait, yes it is. I can't stop laughing. I can imagine this being in a Robot Chicken episode...Or a Tim and Eric Awesome Show Great Job skit.
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| Astrid |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 4:04pm |
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I like this one, too. It's like one big middle finger. LOL. Anyway, its well written, well formatted and meets all the criteria. |
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| bobtheballa |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 7:29pm |
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LocationRaleigh, NC Posts191 Posts Per Day 0.34 |
Yikes. Poor grammar, no drama, there was a secret and a picnic though.
As for "scripts that didn't even try," I thought this one was funnier than "Memories" and it's the first script I've ever read written by a cartoon character. |
| August 09 OWC
My Big Fat Geek Wedding Proposal
(Short, Romantic Dramedy w/ music) - A socially inept college kid enlists the help of his fraternity brother to write a wedding proposal in song-form for his girlfriend of one month.
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| Dreamscale |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 8:26pm |
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Yellow  Yes, that is my real hair...
LocationArizona Posts2293 Posts Per Day 2.86 |
Pathetic! Embarrassing! Really a total terd. Another cr** entry that didn't take anything seriously. Not remotely funny. This kind of s*** shouldn't even be allowed to be posted.
What a waste! |
| To ski or not to ski...that's not even a question. |
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| steven8 |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 8:56pm |
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Green  Darn darn, darn, darn, darn!
LocationBarberton, OH Posts724 Posts Per Day 9.38 |
Pathetic! Embarrassing! Really a total terd. Another cr** entry that didn't take anything seriously. Not remotely funny. This kind of s*** shouldn't even be allowed to be posted.
What a waste! |
I don't think it's any stretch of the imagination to think that the author did not feel they had just produced the next Citizen Kane when it was completed. Dreamy, I'm beginning to wonder if folks don't just do this stuff to see if they can get your blood vessels to burst. Seems to be working. . . |
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| Andrew Allen |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 9:16pm |
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LocationSingapore Posts591 Posts Per Day 0.93 |
Well.... I am a little flummoxed as to why someone would enter this!
Comedy is so subjective! If I thought it was funny, I would probably be enthused about this, but I didn't and I'm not!
I look forward to the author's comments!
Andrew |
| "Well, we have to end apartheid for one. And slow down the nuclear arms race, stop terrorism and world hunger. We have to provide food and shelter for the homeless, and oppose racial discrimination and promote civil rights, while also promoting equal rights for women. We have to encourage a return to traditional moral values. Most importantly, we have to promote general social concern and less materialism in young people." |
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| Shelton |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 9:22pm |
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LocationHighland, IN Posts3530 Posts Per Day 2.22 |
I look forward to the author's comments!
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I think this was written by the AMPTP's script machine. |
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| Cam17 |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 9:29pm |
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LocationLos Angeles Posts161 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
I'm guessing the author is British, from his use of the phrase the "lot of them." Just a guess, though. I have to admit, it was so damn primitive it made me laugh. This really reads like something written by a high school freshman. No drama, no dialogue, no characterization. But the thought of this little bastard calling his family a bunch of creepy cunts...it made me laugh. |
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| Andrew Allen |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 9:33pm |
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Green Lazy arse.
LocationSingapore Posts591 Posts Per Day 0.93 |
But the thought of this little bastard calling his family a bunch of creepy cunts...it made me laugh. |
Haha!! That just really made me chuckle. I have no idea why, but the use of "little bastard" can be so funny when used correctly!
Quoted from Shelton I think this was written by the AMPTP's script machine. |
And possibly one or two more! Andrew |
| "Well, we have to end apartheid for one. And slow down the nuclear arms race, stop terrorism and world hunger. We have to provide food and shelter for the homeless, and oppose racial discrimination and promote civil rights, while also promoting equal rights for women. We have to encourage a return to traditional moral values. Most importantly, we have to promote general social concern and less materialism in young people." |
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| mcornetto |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 9:38pm |
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Location37° 49' S 144° 58' E Posts2649 Posts Per Day 2.28 |
Looks like someone jizzed all over the OWC. |
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| The boy who could fly |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 9:41pm |
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LocationBritish Columbia, Canada Posts1279 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
This is a breathless, exciting story, heartbreaking and exhilarating at the same time........wait...that's Eberts review for slumdog, oh well, I think it fits for this one as well, me likey  |
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| Shelton |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 9:42pm |
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LocationHighland, IN Posts3530 Posts Per Day 2.22 |
This script makes me want to never write anything again. There are probably some who are pleased by that. |
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| Tommyp |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 10:05pm |
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Green  Continuity Is For Pussies...
LocationAustralia Posts775 Posts Per Day 1.54 |
Hmmm interesting script. Don't really like it. At all. Too short... and to yuck... |
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