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Posted: November 12th, 2009, 10:55pm Report to Moderator
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The Debt Collector by Richard Rivera - Drama -  A verbally abusive debt collector gets more than he bargains for when his latest call results in a woman committing suicide -- and a grief stricken husband bent on revenge. 104 pages - pdf, format


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Richard, I read parts of your script and have it saved to my desktop to read more. I found this to be very well written. I read the first ten pages or so then went to later pages.  The theme is a littlle depressing but I like the idea of the woman comitting suicide and her husband avenging her death. That part is exciting, i really like the way you laid it out.  Good luck with it.  Marvin.
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MavinK:

Thanks for the kind remarks, It's appreciated!

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