Deviljohns Bridge by Isidor Leontis (John Lents) - Comedy, Women's Movie - A world war II drama about a mother who prostitutes herself in order to feed her children 90 pages - doc, format

Um.  I don't know where to start with this one.  

First thing right off the bat:  FORMAT FORMAT FORMAT!

Sentences are ambiguous and confusing.  

Logline.  It's a comedy, women's movie, but in the next sentence, " A World War II DRAMA...???

You could use some time reading a few scripts here. This one is all over the map. The formatting is nowhere near close. You use all caps so often, it is like you are yelling at me. At first I did not know this was even a script with all of the credits, cast line up and what not.
Huge blocks of action not really making much sense at all. Maybe it is the translation or something, but the dialog does not make a lot of sense as well. At the start, I had to open it with word. Get a writing program and by all means read some scripts.

Shawn.....><