To catch a predator... by Chris Pender (theolsen3) - Short, Suspense, Comedy - John Dale is a middle aged man, who has a problem. A dark secret, that two men want revenge for and they'll do anything to get it. 15 pages - pdf, format

so i read this after glancing at radar love, and it wasnt until i got to the second/third page that i realized that it was written by the same person.

once again, your format is entirely off.

i would have put this down, but i recently wrote a script called "to molest a molestor" and i was curious if it dealt with the same concepts.

i quickly realized that my script and your script have nothing in common.

more disturbingly, i realized that this is the second script you posted in a row that deals with some form of torture. and once again, this script isnt very good. in fact, its cliched, bland, and just plain awful.

ask yourself why- why am i writing this script? because both this script and radar love have noting to offer anyone. its not entertaining. its not clever. and its certainly not genre breaking.

the whole child molestation angle in this script was kinda sick too. you even mentioned "kidz bop" in your descriptions- who does that?

for your sake, i hope this is a joke. im going to give you the benefit of the doubt...