Dead Simple by Sean Halket - Short, Thriller - Getting a divorce...isn't as simple as some might think. 15 pages - pdf, format

This is a good script. It's simple and easy to follow. The one problem you have is that you are supposed to show, not tell. For instance, you say that one of the characters is on the verge of tears. This could easily be changed to: Kate's eyes start to get wet." or something like that. Another time I noticed this was at the end of your script. You write "The final blow has killed Richard....." That doesn't need to be there at all. If you took that sentence out and just left it, it would be fine. Overall: I like the story. It's not great or anything, but it's not bad at all.