Sam Hell by Ray Sinanaj (RSIN57) - Thriller, Paranormal - Sam Heller bargains with the devil only to realize he’s worse than he seems. When Sam discovers a doomsday plot in the making, he’ll do anything to stop it. (92 pages) - pdf, format

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Hey, Ray

Title page - keep everything 12pt courier, just like the screenplay itself.

EXT. CEMETERY - NIGHT
Fog pours over the hills of a moonlit graveyard. A black SUV
sits parked, engine idling, headlights shining on an exhumed
grave.
Slug already told us it's at a cemetery, graveyard is redundant
Sits parked is itself redundant
Engine idles, not idling
headlights shine, not shining

A black SUV idles under moonlight, headlights shine on an exhumed grave.

Two thugs, VINNY mid forties, and ANTHONY mid thirties,
dressed in velour sweat suits and gaudy gold jewelry, drag a
wooden box towards the edge of an open grave. They position
themselves on both ends of the box, and prepare to throw it
in to the hole.
Thugs is a... fairly loose job occupation. Their actions and attire should suggest such.
Not "an open grave". Unless there's more than one out there this night, "the exhumed grave".
"prepare to throw it in the hole" is kind of a given considering they're
- standing at each end of a box (presumably person sized, not jewelery)
- at an exhumed grave
- in a cemetery
- at night.

VINNY, 40s, and ANTHONY 30s, velour sweat suits and
gaudy gold jewelry, drag a makeshift, wooden coffin to the grave.
They stand at both ends of the box.

VINNY
1... 2... 3... Now!
Gotta spell out the numbers.
VINNY
One... two... three... Now!

And most people agree to toss on three rather than that four count.
If this is gonna be a comedy they can have a little cliche conversation "On or after the count of three?"

Turn off your program's page (CONTINUED)/CONTINUED: and dialog (CONT’D) features.

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GL

The other Ray