Howdy Sean, and presumably Ben,
Even though it's stupid and superfluous, always begin with a left justified FADE IN:
(I don't make these stupid rules. I just parrot them. Sometimes.)
Ditch the scene numbers and don't include introductory credit sequence.
Don't need periods after your slug lines/scene headings.
JOHNNIE (NARRATION)
What you want here is a V.O. for voice over, rather than a NARRATION.
Here:
http://www.scribd.com/doc/12721428/Professional-Screenplay-Formatting-GuideLook over that some.
It's one of the better online format guides.
JOHNNIE, a twenty-four year old man, is standing by a train
station with his vintage, brown, shabby Globite suitcase in
his hand. He looks confused and innocent - just like a
toddler would if he or she were lost. He has rough, messy
short brown hair. He is wearing a flannelette, long-sleeved
shirt and rough dirt-stained and tattered jeans with
tattered boots poking out at the bottom. JOHNNIE puts his
suitcase on the ground, and hurriedly rummages through his
flannelette shirt pockets. In the third pocket he looks
through he finds a train ticket. He unscrunches it and
reads. He perks his head and ears as he hears another train
in the distance.
Umm... that'll need to be broken up.
Hit your "Enter" button after each sentence.
There's a lot of work to be re-done on this.
(Been there. Doing that.)
I don't know how much effort you want to put into learning all the format stuff a spec script kinda demands.
It's kinda silly but necessary.
Chime in soon, okay? Please?