Against Medical Advice by Joseph LoBianco (joebo83) - Action, Adventure -  One mans revenge against the healthcare system goes wrong and will change another man's life forever.This all takes place in the setting of an ER. 100 pages - doc, format

I read this through to page twenty seven but there was something nagging at the back of my mind. The guy who pays fifty grand... he just got pissed off one night? Maybe its because im not american. I dont know anything about the health system out there but it seems a bit rash. What if he was a psychiatric patient himself? That would make more sense. Love the idea though. Ive been through the psyc system myself and was appauled at how i was treated etc. Im just a rookie but i think you have something here.

Also, did you write it on word? That must have taken ages. Celtx is free but not the best.

Thumbs up from me but as I said i cant read anymore because the guy at the start... its just unbelievable that he would pay fifty grand because of something like that.