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Shopping at Save Mart by Josh Bushman - Short, Comedy - It's late at night and Allen thinks he can just walk inside his local Save Mart, but Allen is in for a big surprise when he finds out the store is possessed by the voice of a women and she is angry with him. So it's up to Allen to discover what he must do to make things right. 6 pages - pdf, format
It was a wacky sketch, based on a simple change in reality. A one joke sketch, but with a touch of heart. Plenty of comedy series and shows are based on this premise.
Yes, the format needs some work and yes I could point out a few things, and I'm still learning everyday round here, but it is what it is. A semi surrealist take on a domestic scene, thrown into a supermarket.
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EXT. SAVE MART - NIGHT A car pulls into a bare parking lot. ALLEN, (24), exits the vehicle. Walks to the front of the building. The slide doors do not open. Confused, Allen looks at a sign that states OPEN 24/7. ALLEN Huh... ALLEN again walks in front of the doors. Nothing. ALLEN What the... A woman’s VOICE: SALLY And what do you want? This is SALLY. ALLEN, startled, looks round but sees nobody.
SiColl007, thanks for the tip will update this scripts ASAP, even though it's not as crazy as Damn You Bruce or 3 Nazi's it's still a favorite of mine.
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The previous comments touched on all the problems I found with the script. I thought it was a funny concept. Definitely more of a sketch. It reminds me of the things people wrote when I was at Second City. I thought it was too long, though. Also, I didn't really like some of the dialogue of the main character. Hopefully you fixed the problems, because it does have potential.