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Posted: July 25th, 2012, 4:25pm Report to Moderator
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Enemy in the Heart by Devin Rumer (psykpyrate) - Drama - Olivia, a young American woman during WWII is forced to have German prisoners on her farm. Family and friends are torn apart by a war and long held beliefs are challenged. Can Olivia find love and meaning in one who she believes is the enemy? 131 pages - pdf, format


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"dishwater blonde hair."
-- before or after having washed the dishes???

You need some sort of reference to the man in the plane.

This isn't so back visually, but I think the writing needs upping some. Also, it feels a little long in the tooth - some of the dialogue could be cut back etc.
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