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Posted: September 19th, 2012, 4:30pm Report to Moderator
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Darkness And Men's Eyes by Brad Smith - Drama - A father, a son and brother, one blind from birth, struggle to come to terms with the effects of violence on men. 98 pages - pdf, format


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Hi Bradley. This has got two many words in it.

Check the first slug, followed by the first description. There's stuff like the policeman driving a moving car - all needs to be cut down and tightened up some.

You know that you don't actually get the police car to stop, do you?

Good luck with it.
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