Hi, that´s my first post here and english is not my first language, but i try my best.. )...so here is my belief about the script. --on some points the action have to go further... --the dialogue is sometimes not the best..(that´s just me..) --show us more thing´s ..we don´t need to get thing´s from dialogue.. I just reached page 4.. but under the dash...pretty ok.. ..go on... |