Unlike Dustin, I couldn't get past the first page to decide whether this was an excellent story or not. The reason being that it is very, very overwritten.
You're trying to set the scene like this is a novel or something. You're not letting the audience make anything up for themselves. You're first two pages alone are just very steep.
You wrote:
"INT. CEO’S HOUSE - GAME ROOM - NIGHT
Three men sit at a table, playing a game of poker. Each is
holding a pair of cards, shifting their gazes between one
another.
Inside the room is a fireplace burning in the background.
They play on a real poker table, complete with green felt
and all the markings. Several other games are scattered
throughout the room such as a dartboard and a miniature golf
hole."
Could easily be written as:
"INT. CEO'S HOUSE - GAMES ROOM - NIGHT
THREE MEN sit and play poker around a poker table in the
middle of a lavish games room. They all look between one
another, curious." .... or something like that?
See? Same effect. Less words. Let the reader use their imagination a little bit. You don't need to describe everything in the room.
You're first few pages haven't hooked me, and they're so bogged down that I can't enjoy what I'm reading. Less is best, basic is better. I would suggest reading a few more screenplays on the board to get the hang of it more (not than I'm saying I'm a pro, because I'm seriously not, and I hope I'm not coming off as a dick.)
You also wrote:
"The CEO (30) is of an average build, again dressed in a
simple T-shirt and jeans. He’s loud and boisterous, fancying
himself an entertainer."
You're telling is he's fancying himself as an entertainer and he is boisterous, but you need to SHOW us this somehow.
Anyways, good luck with this, I haven't seen you myself around the boards too much, from what I can re-call. But if you check in, I might come back and attempt reading more of this.
Good luck again.
-- Curt