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Ode to Blue Valentine: Ryan Gosling (currently 3345 views) |
Don |
Posted: June 15th, 2014, 3:12pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts16381 Posts Per Day 1.94 |
Ode to Blue Valentine: Ryan Gosling by Kyle Smead - Short, Drama - An actor's Script: James, an isolated greaser, goes through steps of the the method to prepare for a love scene. 5 pages - pdf, format |
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------------- You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take. - Wayne Gretzky
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Toby_E |
Posted: June 15th, 2014, 3:25pm |
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Posted: June 15th, 2014, 3:45pm |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.37 |
Sweet Jesus lol Very poetic Mark |
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AnthonyCawood |
Posted: June 15th, 2014, 5:40pm |
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Posted: June 15th, 2014, 5:46pm |
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Posted: June 15th, 2014, 6:04pm |
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LocationCalifornia Posts510 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
That could be the greatest thing I ever read! Lol. |
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SAC |
Posted: June 15th, 2014, 7:53pm |
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Of The Ancients … but some dreams do
LocationUpstate NY Posts3201 Posts Per Day 0.79 |
Did this guy Kyle hide a microphone in my shower, or what? Sheesh... |
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Posted: June 15th, 2014, 11:20pm |
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That was f*ckin crazy..LOL....So stupid, but so ridiculously funny. |
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Posted: June 16th, 2014, 12:45am |
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Posted: June 16th, 2014, 1:28am |
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LocationOver there. Posts2354 Posts Per Day 0.43 |
This was silly. Very.
And repetitious. And silly. And repetitious.
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bert |
Posted: June 16th, 2014, 9:26am |
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AdministratorBuy the ticket, take the ride
LocationThat's me in the corner Posts4232 Posts Per Day 0.61 |
An actor's script? What actor haha.
Repeating dialogue for effect is one thing, but the actions are also maddeningly repetitive. They would likely appear comical if played out as written.
Despite all of that, there is something oddly compelling going on here.
I do hope Mr. Smead joins us. He's got some 'splainin to do. |
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Posted: June 16th, 2014, 9:50am |
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LocationVancouver, British Columbia, Canada Posts2023 Posts Per Day 0.28 |
http://www.houdeschoolofacting.org/wp/about-us/the-meisner-method/…unless I miss my guess, which I may well have. For what this is, I'm kinda thinking that it's well-paced and would probably be fun to watch. There's something interesting about the idea of a scripted presentation of an improvisational form, though I wonder if this would play well or seem really rigid if you actually shot it. |
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Posted: June 16th, 2014, 10:37am |
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LocationChrist, I can't find it. Posts80 Posts Per Day 0.02 |
Got to steal my thoughts from Toby.
I guess the formatting is fine...... Rob |
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DustinBowcot |
Posted: June 16th, 2014, 1:11pm |
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Well written... just not my cup o' tea. |
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Posted: June 16th, 2014, 3:12pm |
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I might watch if cast with Lenny and Squiggy. |
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