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Posted: June 15th, 2014, 3:12pm Report to Moderator
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Ode to Blue Valentine:  Ryan Gosling by Kyle Smead - Short, Drama - An actor's Script:  James, an isolated greaser, goes through steps of the the method to prepare for a love scene. 5 pages - pdf, format


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Hahaha, what the fuck did I just read?



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Sweet Jesus lol

Very poetic  

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Well formatted!


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That could be the greatest thing I ever read! Lol.  
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Did this guy Kyle hide a microphone in my shower, or what? Sheesh...


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That was f*ckin crazy..LOL....So stupid, but so ridiculously funny.



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This was amazing.
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This was silly. Very.

And repetitious. And silly. And repetitious.

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An actor's script?  What actor haha.

Repeating dialogue for effect is one thing, but the actions are also maddeningly repetitive.  They would likely appear comical if played out as written.

Despite all of that, there is something oddly compelling going on here.

I do hope Mr. Smead joins us.  He's got some 'splainin to do.


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http://www.houdeschoolofacting.org/wp/about-us/the-meisner-method/

…unless I miss my guess, which I may well have.

For what this is, I'm kinda thinking that it's well-paced and would probably be fun to watch. There's something interesting about the idea of a scripted presentation of an improvisational form, though I wonder if this would play well or seem really rigid if you actually shot it.
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I guess the formatting is fine......

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Well written... just not my cup o' tea.
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I might watch if cast with Lenny and Squiggy.
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