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Posted: June 24th, 2014, 4:52pm Report to Moderator
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The Child Soldier by Boaz - Drama - When rebel forces scorch down a whole village, only taking its children, they will be pressed with the hard decision of either embracing darkness or stepping into the light. 79 pages - pdf, format


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Hello Boaz Asaasira & Mabasso Jr.!

I'm moved.

When this title appeared, I was sure to read it one time. My neighbor is coming from Liberia. He flew in the nineties from a "similar" situation as Uganda. Sometimes we are sitting all night long thinking about the African situation.

Just by reading the title I knew this screenplay will be made. It's simply necessary.

As I went to IMDB, watching if your title is blocked, I saw you're already in pre-production. And that's more than great.

The screenplay itself isn't perfectly polished. But you know: It doesn't have to be. It's too meaningful. It succeeds in every way. There's a need. Finally it opens the eyes what a screenplay could stand for, what's in our authors' hands'.

I recommend everyone around here to take a look at this script. At latest by page 20 this thing gathers a momentum where you can't hide as a human. Please read over the format and writing issues, it is worth it.

For me, the story is phenomenal.

A few points, just if you're still in development. Rick hiding his I pod is unbelievable. Page 32 is heavy. There you go too far. I think you know what I mean. And I guess that's forbidden. And finally, I think you should have a fade over black in the end where you describe the situation as real. Because it is. Names like Joseph Kony and numbers of victims could build a better connection to this reality. It's no fiction. IMO it deserves to be clearer in the end.


What a script. I am speechless.

Men, you brought important things onto paper. It was at thrill for my heart.

Thank you very much for sharing such a meaningful piece. It's terrific.

Best of luck



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AsaasiraBoaz
Posted: June 29th, 2014, 6:46pm Report to Moderator
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Hello, Prussian Mosby
Thank for reading the child soldier.. we're going to work that RICK scene very soon..
and about the pre-preduction was put on hold cos the producer vanished, he doesnt reply my emails or calls. so me and my pal we have decided to crowd fundraiser  for this film, we will be lunching campaign soon on one of the crowd-funding website and if anyone out there want to producer this script or to be part of it is welcome.
just email me.
thanks
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