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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    Unproduced Screenplay Discussion    Sci Fi and Fantasy Scripts  ›  Incoming Evil Moderators: bert
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Don
Posted: July 5th, 2014, 8:24am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Incoming Evil by Delvonnie Stephens - Sci Fi, Fantasy - Upon discovering that he’s an alien prince of a superhuman race, 18-year-old college freshman John Stevens must team up with three other super beings (one of them his older brother) to fight evil alien monsters that want to conquer Earth and enslave the human race. 74 pages - doc, format


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Posted: July 6th, 2014, 8:47pm Report to Moderator
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Delvonnie,

Bad formatting. I suggest losing the word processor and getting a script software. Not sure where you got the idea of all caps in action blocks but you should check out scripts to learn proper formatting.

You started your story interestingly enough but not continuing until you make changes. Too bad,  I love sci-fi.


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