Just Another Day by Siva B. (zlippr) - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy - A story about a doctor examining a patient before sent him off to asylum. During the interview he found something unusual about the patient. 8 pages - pdf, format

logline is suspect. Two sentences that have no flow and are grammatically incorrect to boot. It's 8 pages so I may as well give it a shot.

Code SCENE 1 - INT. SOME HOSPITAL - NIGHT

No need for scene numbers. No need to mention SOME... just HOSPITAL would be fine.

Code We are moving towards the empty hallway.

You're directing the shot. There isn't any need. It would also help if you gave more of an indication in the slug whereabouts in the hospital we are to begin with. The empty hallway has not been established yet so it would be 'an empty hallway'.

Code Right at the middle of it we stopped and turn right and we see what it appear as a MEDICAL DOCTOR room.

Locations are the only thing I like to place in uppercase within action. Nice to see the same logic applied. However, if we are now actually in the hallway then it needs a slug to suggest that as it is a change of location. There's actually a right turn into another hallway?

Keep practising with the English. If English is your first language and you've left school, I'd suggest going back. You've got a few years to catch up.