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Posted: December 18th, 2014, 6:26pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Good Wife - "Pro Tem" by Julian Kotler - Series, Drama - The Good Wife TV series - Alicia takes a shot at playing Judge while Cary and Diane face a familiar foe.  1 hour legal drama. 56 pages. pdf, format. - pdf, format


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Posted: December 19th, 2014, 1:19pm Report to Moderator
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Looks like another one yulelog may want to take a look at. Apologies if I got the handle wrong. I just can't be bothered to double check.

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Kalinda is heading toward reception.


Your first line is not as active as it could be due to the inclusion of 'is' in this case. Remove it.
Kalinda heads toward reception.

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Kalinda is heading toward reception. Cell phone in hand as
she’s reading a text message.


The above is all one sentence. Kalinda, reading a text message, heads toward reception.

I think that's enough.
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