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Symphorophilia by Nikki A. Lee - Short, Thriller - A husband and his sister-in-law discovers a dark truth behind his wife's strange behavior after her car accident. 12 pages - pdf format

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Interesting story.  Missing some "S's" and the dialogue was a bit too-on-the-nose in some spots, IMO.  Other than that, I liked it.

Seems like Tessa was more a pyromaniac as it stands. (or a pyronymph)

Not sure I understood the meaning of the last line;  "I...will...destroy her.

Good effort nonetheless.
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