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Don
Posted: June 24th, 2015, 6:45pm Report to Moderator
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Funny Farm by Deshon Porter - Series, Comedy - Life in the burbs from moving day till marriage can Jessica  and her boyfriend take it all in stride? 12 pages - pdf, format


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Error opening the PDF. Anyone else?

Grammatical errors in the logline as well.
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He's right. 404.

The logline seems to be lacking a lot of punctuation, or any frankly. They're avoiding it like it's broccoli

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Link fixed.

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Yeah, it's bad. Very bad. I wouldn't even know where to begin correcting this... but if say the authors are around 9... don't lose heart, if you show up, I'll help as much as I can.
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Sorry, couldn't read this.

Formatting is way off and the grammar is very bad. Honestly, you should, at least, have these two things pretty much in check before posting.


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Quoted from rendevous
He's right. 404.

The logline seems to be lacking a lot of punctuation, or any frankly. They're avoiding it like it's broccoli

R

Explains why you left your own punctuation off, right?   Goats and keys gone missing, lost your better half in the shops the other day, and now your full-stops - well, one of 'em anyway.  



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Quoted from LC

Explains why you left your own punctuation off, right?   Goats and keys gone missing, lost your better half in the shops the other day, and now your full-stops - well, one of 'em anyway.  



Eh? Oh. I just spotted it. Trust you to see it a about a week before me, Elsie. Good work.

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