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Don
Posted: September 4th, 2015, 6:46pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Blacc Rose Family by Bernard Antoine Mersier - Drama, Crime - Violation against the family results in death, no questions asked.  121 pages  - pdf format

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Ok, getting late, but, while too violent for me, I am intrigued with this one. Maybe it's the v.o. narrative as we go place to place. Maybe it's because one of your bits of wisdom didn't lead this off. I hope to finish, if the violence doesn't stop me or I don't get the impression you're around for feedback only marketing, but that's cool.
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Ps, not a logline, again...
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I've read some of this guy's work and what I like is how naturally he writes black characters, he also has a good flow. The writing is off, but there's definitely a story-telling voice... and I like it.

I haven't got time to read it all, not for a while... but it would be nice to see how the story holds up later down the line. Still though, at 124 pages, doesn't seem like he's messing around.
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