Psychic Paddy by Alan Power - Short - A psychic tries to heal his sick dog by contacting spirit doctors but ends up summoning evil spirits instead. 10 pages - pdf, format

Alan,

Sorry, I couldn't get through this.  My bad.

Best
Richard

At first I thought RichardR's comment was a bit rude. Then I started to read this script.
As I was (trying) to read it I could almost feel all the cocaine and/or energy drink you must've consumed whilst writing this in my own system.

Here's why:

Quoted Text ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE DOOR The Film Crew glance at each other, decide, then leave. Paddy turns back - I'm screwed. Paper flies in his face. He's startled. Runs toward the ouija board. But the boom wire lifts up and trips him. He crawls. A chair lands on him. Then a table. Finally a blanket engulfs him. He rolls around screaming. A belt wraps him in the blanket. Paddy gets up. Runs into a wall. Falls over. Squirms out of the blanket. Pounces for the ouija board. But it's gone.

Your logline really got me interested and though I appreciate the playful tone, this frenetic style of writing makes it's nearly impossible to get a clear picture of what is going on most of the time.
Would love to see a rewrite though.


Sandro