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Don
Posted: January 5th, 2016, 6:24pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Autumn Dogs by Steve Miles - Drama, WW I - As a wave of dissent threatens to engulf the Western Front, a conflicted Redcap clashes with a vengeful Captain over orders to track down and assassinate a group of mutineers.  91 pages - pdf, format


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Glad to finally see this up, Steve. You know how much I enjoyed this on both occasions that I have previously read it, which is definitely saying something. There's really not many scripts that I would enjoy reading twice.

Want me to take another look at it for you?


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Toby -- a number of minor changes, though the main story is still the same.  I fleshed out the conflict between Hansard and the Brigadier (p.11 and pp.73-4), hopefully gives a little more weight to their actions.  If you wanted to check those pages out?

For anyone else who might be interested I'm happy to return reads (features/shorts).  If anyone’s keen for an exchange just get in touch here or via PM.  

Steve.


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Nice changes, Steve. Really not much for me to comment on, beside the single typo:

P. 11 -- "Then your questioning..." should be "you're".

Good stuff. Looking forward to hearing others' thoughts and comments


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And that's what I get for making last minute changes...

Thanks Toby. Let me know when your new drafts are ready.

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