Hand Jobs Are Easy by 0 - Short, Light Yet Mature Comedy - A gang of supers help Madame Mayor save her city from Nymphites. 4 pages - pdf, format

Wow that was beautiful, bring a tear to a glass eye.

Sex and violence... Saving the town by fucking them to death... awesome, where is this town?

Writer,

This was cute. I chuckled at a few lines. Hard to tell who the real protagonist is here. This seemed more of an ensemble piece! Decent job, and funny in some areas but overall nothing that makes it stand apart.

Steve

Don't know what to say about this one. Read the title and the logline and knew I wouldn't like it. Read the script and my guess proved to be true.

I thought it was very funny. I kind of appreciated the romance in this too - very subtly put by the way.
And it's funny all through.

Thanks for the entertainment!

Hmmm...I don't get it, really.  I did read the whole thing, though.

Obviously, there are many attempts at humor and there are various super heroes...but I didn't laugh at all and I didn't see any super feats being accomplished by these so called super heroes.

Didn't work for me, but some may find some funnies here.

I enjoyed the read. Had a few chuckles. But in the end it feels like it's trying not to be porn. Sort of straddling the fence.

Had real potential but fizzled out in the end. And I think the writer ran out of time and/or inspiration too.

3 laughs out of 10

Didn't really work for me. Some witty lines there but a bit too OTT and immature humour for my liking. But would appeal to a certain audience I suppose.

Didn't work for me. Period. I got bored with it fast. but what was I really expecting from that title? Something clean? Of course not. But by page 3 i was starting to yawn. F bombs, sex jokes. Is that all there is to a fire?

i need a nice warm shower to clean off the dirt.

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Also, Thor is a Marvel comics character - was there something wrong with giving this character a suggestive name as well?

Not really sure what to make of this one. The conversations and interactions work, there's superheroes in it, but just didn't laugh that much. It's really a lot of banter and innuendo, good read but not enough comedy

I didn't really laugh either.  It was okay.  I am gonna guess that Dustin did this one.  I guess right last time.  Lets see if I go 2 for 2...

It could have been really funny.  But, it just didn't work for me.  But, it was an easy read and it went by fast.  Kinda like a lot of orgasms in the script, I'd guess...

And the story seemed like a joke, again, instead of a story.

5/10

Dan

Seems like it was written in a rush and I found it more weird than funny. Didn't really do much for me.

This is a perfect porno script. Hot adult superstars, terrible acting and this script would make for something so bad it would be awesome!

As for the challenge it fits the parameters (apart from using Thor, but there were other original superheroes so I think that’s OK) but it’s mainly talking heads and didn’t do much for me, apart from making me do a superhero search on Pornhub!

-Mark

0,

What just happened? No idea, but I feel quite violated and dirty after that read. Thanks, I guess.

(No idea what was going on)

Glenn.