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Simply Super by 0 - Short, Comedy - Newbie writers threaten the Simply Scripts bastion with their methods. Is there a hero out there to stop them? Well...possibly lol. 6 pages pdf - pdf, format
Good show. Loved your opening paragraph - sorry, action block. Great idea to use An SS member as your hero, and spot on in some areas. It made me smile. My second one in and this is pretty good!
Tried to open this one and also got a black page but no error message. I was able to download it and read it.
I like it a lot but that may be because I'm a newbie here myself. Really making an effort now to participate.
Anyway, just one little objective comment . . . on the first page ALEX is the character speaking four times in a row. Was that what you wanted? I was a little confused.
Funny little riff on the opening Batman scene, with the twisted, misshapen Bushman filling in for the dark knight. "Slurp on my pork sword" is the early contender for line of the challenge.
script opened for me with no problem. Some generic characters (SS Dude, SS Girl) didn't please me in the read due to generics, a character gives a synopsis of a story which makes a mouthful, and I can't get into this. I'll try again later if I'm in a better frame of mind- but for now, it reads very last minute thought up on the fly.
I thought they said and did random stuff. Like when one of them handed the other the copy of his short script - didn't get what for. Or when they say that Bush is gonna be after them.
Then again my attention wasn't in it - I don't like this kind of scripts. So maybe you better just disregard my post.
I'm interested in reading animation, horror, sci fy, suspense, fantasy, and anything that is good. I enjoy writing the same. Looking to team with anyone!
Didn’t open for me, I just got a black screen. If anyone has the same issue, just choose the ‘Open With Different Viewer’ option or download it and it works fine.
A Simply Script Spoof, I loved it, although only people from this forum would really appreciate it. ‘I’m out by page one man’ made me lol for real.
-Mark
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Okay - this one - so far - has gotten the biggest laugh for me. Sure, it's audience is going to be somewhat limited to SS ers - but I definitely was not out on page 1. I quite liked this. My favorite so far.