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Posted: August 21st, 2016, 5:19pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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A Crimson Collar by Dominic Croucher - Short, Drama - A doctor returns to work after a hit and run, desperate for normality, but her hopes are shattered by the first patient of the day.  10 pages - pdf, format


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Not sure how you want this filmed, is it a sign? “Population 2,173.”

TITLE should be SUPER.

I would be lying if I said I totally got it. It’s been a long day and I’m tired. Maybe I need to take another look tomorrow.

I did enjoy it though. Some of the imagery it absolutely fantastic.

The constant “yeah” was a bit much, sure you could have found a suitable substitute to break it up.

Overall, good job


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