Danny Sellers: The Early Case by Mykel D. Myules - Drama - A small time private investigator stumbles into the biggest case of his life, one that endangers the lives of everyone close to him. But one that, if he can handle it, could lead to uncovering the corrupt politicians who he feels ruined his life and led his girlfriend into an earlier life of drugs and prostitution. Danny Sellers is a character conflicted in that he a middle-aged ex-hippie who feels all the "others" have sold out to the "establishment". 107 pages - pdf, format

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I read all 107 pages.  You had a story.  You wanted to write it with the hope that readers would want to see it.

I'm pretty certain that you're a novice screenwriter; so am I.   You invested loads of time and effort into your creation.  I'm sure, you love it.  All screenwriters love their own stuff.  But no one is going to read your screenplay unless you get screenwriter savy

Here's a tip; novice to novice.  My "stuff" has been ripped to shreds over and over again, but it's helped me to improve, I think.  

Get screenwriting educated!  There's a ton of free stuff out there on the net.  Free Screenwriting software, You Tube tutorials, etc.  

You're obviously creative.  After all is said and done a review of your story is going to be subjective; no matter.

Damn the torpedoes, full speed ahead!