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Posted: January 22nd, 2017, 4:16pm Report to Moderator
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Bed by K.H.V. - Short, Drama - Within the privacy of their bedroom, a young couple experiences love and hate through their relationship. 13 pages - pdf, format

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Very interesting. The screenplay was well-written.
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The ending kind of fizzles out, but you did well to keep your story entertaining in such a limited setting. Maybe the relationship between the couple was too inconsistent; Tommy says 'you don't give a shit!', but at the same time, the two are very close.


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