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Don
Posted: March 19th, 2017, 5:59pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Therapist by Ba Kiwanuka - Short, Horror - A routine kill for a serial killer turns out to be anything but. - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work



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Not a huge fan of the story - not my genre .However thought it was well written and it had me turning pages till the end. Nice work.


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Thanks for the review eldave1. Sorry about the tardy reply but I'm upcountry in Uganda on community health issues so I've rarely got time these days to get online...that is if I can find access in these remote villages.

Anyway, cheers.


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You are more than welcome. Hope your health improves


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Oh my health is fine, I'm doing community outreach health services...but thanks anyway. Lol


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Quoted from Ba
Oh my health is fine, I'm doing community outreach health services...but thanks anyway. Lol


Good to hear


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RichardR
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Some notes.

Not a bad tale.  A little telegraphic but hidden for the most part.  Works for me.  

Best
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Thanks Richard.


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