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Don
Posted: April 2nd, 2017, 3:33pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Candidate by Robin Vicci - Drama - Darrell Eckhart is sent to investigate Senator George Bale for taking illegal money to fund his campaign, which Darrell did not know is that in his desperation to lower the popularity of the current president, the senator makes a desperate move, spreads a new Mortal virus, without antidote which expands to the whole world. 124 pages - pdf, format

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Robin - the premise is interesting but the opening page is riddled with typos and grammatical errors. Folks are not going to get beyond that.

You need to have this proof read or perhaps buy a grammar tool (Grammerly is a good one) to address these issues.


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